Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge #84: Smooth and Milk

Posted on 2016-02-15 by Olga

 

Smooth talker shrouds truth

Unforeseen revelation

Curdles glass of milk

 

(Here’s Ron’s link to take a peek.)

About Olga

I have always had an affinity for artistic endeavors and the beauties of nature. The power of the word combined with photography have become my creative spark.
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24 Responses to Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge #84: Smooth and Milk

  1. Marissa Bergen says:
    2016-02-15 at 8:42 pm

    I think I know this person! Good one! P.S. Please tell me that milk isn’t actually curdled!

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    • Olga says:
      2016-02-15 at 8:50 pm

      You never know what secret lies within a person until it curdles your milk. No, the visual is not actually curdles. I needed to alter my original photo to get an impression of curdling.

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  2. Janice says:
    2016-02-15 at 10:50 pm

    One of my haikus coming out tomorrow uses ‘smooth talker’ but the similarity stops there. Your haiku is amazing. I like the story feeling and the milk curdling conclusion!

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  3. Al The Author says:
    2016-02-16 at 2:12 am

    Love this haiku. Great metaphor / image!

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  4. Walking My Path: Mindful Wanderings in Nature says:
    2016-02-16 at 10:20 am

    Great photo and haiku! The photo really puts a sleazy haze on that smooth talker!

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  5. Emma says:
    2016-02-16 at 1:13 pm

    very clever, and sinister

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  6. Natalia Erehnah says:
    2016-02-16 at 11:30 pm

    Fabulous! Clever use of the prompt words.

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  7. Denis1950 says:
    2016-02-18 at 11:21 pm

    A wonderful haiku Olga with a warning for all those lured into a relationship. A fantastic image to heighten the power of the words.

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  8. Vashti Quiroz-Vega says:
    2016-02-19 at 1:40 pm

    There’s great imagery and passion in this haiku. Love it! ❤ Have a great weekend, Olga!

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  9. vronlacroix says:
    2016-02-20 at 2:11 pm

    You convey much in this haiku. I love your photo.

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  10. Judy Martin says:
    2016-02-21 at 11:40 am

    Ha! Love this Olga, and the image is perfect! 🙂

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  11. Roz Hill says:
    2016-02-23 at 4:27 am

    Wow! This one pulled me in.

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