Time to look inward
Find the key to happiness
Reap rewards of faith
Hidden lessons ease the trials
A new sunrise will inspire
This is my first Tanka (5-7-5-7-7). A haiku with bit of extra. Needed more room to express my poetic thought. Hi Ron!
A message of hope!
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Beautiful tanka thoughts Olga!
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Thank-you, Janice. 🙂
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Really nice! ❤
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Hello Olga! Beautiful and inspiring Tanka! You did a wonderful job. ❤
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Thank-you, Vashti. Wonderful to hear from you. ❤
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Always a pleasure to stop by. 🙂 xx
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A beautiful poem with meaning and a great image too Olga.
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Thank-you, Denis. ❤
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This is encouraging and inspirational! Good job on your first tanka. I love the line “hidden lessons ease the trials”.
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Thank-you Magarisa for you wonderful comment and encouragement. 🙂
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You’re welcome, Olga. 😊
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