Gentle whisper of a solitary teardrop
Holds me spellbound
Surrendering to the moment
Awe envelops my heart
Mountains speak in silence
The wind whisperingly tells of its travels
Fluttering my eyelashes
A last sigh of euphoria
Acknowledging earth’s magnificent splendor
Lonesome tree waves farewell
dVerse Poets’ Pub—hosted be Dee @whimsygizmo
Love it Olga.
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Thank-you, Helene. 🙂
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Love the personification.
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Thank-you, Marissa. The lone tree was an excellent subject. I wish I could have colorized it. A future learning curve. 🙂
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Love it! Bonus points for the “whisperingly,” for sure. Not easy to use that one well. 😉
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Thank-you, De. The wind whispered its approval. 🙂
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Love the poor lonely tree in the end…
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That tree spoke to me in the moment. An image of surviving all odds and standing alone. 🙂
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Did you see that, she brought whisperingly into the poem! Hurrah! That line in particular was very cleverly constructed. And I love the pictures.
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Thanks for the hurrah, Marina. It’s the first time I’ve ever used ‘whisperingly.’ 🙂
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I liked the ending where the tree waved farewell in its lonesomeness.
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Thank-you, Frank. I was sad to leave that lonesome tree behind, but it’s in my memory forever.
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Your use of personification is awe-inspiring in this ❤️
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Thank-you, Sanaa. My recent visit to the Rocky Mountains inspired this quadrille. 🙂
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I was sad to read the ending ~ This is a lovely quadrille ~ Thanks for joining us ~
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Thank-you, Grace. Yes, a sad little tree, all alone. By the way, I tried to post a comment about your quadrille and it seemed to disappear. Could you let me know if you got it. 🙂
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Beautiful Olga, such a magical moment where you can feel connected to the seen and the unseen 💖
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Thank-you, Xenia. The whispers of the nature are poetry in motion. 🙂
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I really like the blend of emotion and nature in this. Just stunning, Olga.
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Thank-you, Victoria. Loved your quadrille also. It was exquisite! ❤
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Amazing poetry Olga speaking out for the tree.
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Thanks, Denis. Actually I was surprised to see it all alone up on a cliff, then I felt sorry for it.
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Solitary trees will do amazing things to hang on to their roots, just like people.
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❤
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A beautiful poem…amazing actually 🙂
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Thank-you, Janice. With the hands of inspiration, one can create amazing things. ❤
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:))
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Your photographs and words resonate with me…..I’m always awed by the splendor of the the mountains as well!
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Thank-you, C.C. The mountains can awaken one’s sense of being in the moment. ❤
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I like the way you build this slowly.
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Thank-you, Rosemary. ❤
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