(Hubble image of Bubble Nebula-credit given to NASA)
Cosmic Wiggle
Hubble sees a giant bubble
Universe burbs and giggles
Cosmic coincidence opens door
To unexpected permutations
Smiling bliss a blink away
Kaleidoscope trees can speak like rainbows
Creative lattice wiggles and giggles
Dreams sprout glistening new pathways
Daring one to take the next step
(My kaleidoscope trees)
I love this Olga! Check out the cosmic coincidence- I used that bubble nebula pic on a post a while back (post titled ‘luminosity’). Your kaleidoscope trees are beautiful 🌈
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Thank, Mek. It is an interesting coincidence. Can you send me the link for ‘luminosity’. I couldn’t find it readily on your blog page.
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You’re welcome. Those mysterious forces are always at play 💕
Here it is: https://10000hoursleft.wordpress.com/2016/06/12/luminosity/
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I should add- I only just realised, I hadn’t selected the image! It was a prompt by Sonya for her three line tales!
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That’s why the image looked so familiar. I went back to Sonya site and she posted the image on June 9/16. That’s when I started a dismal blogging journey for months where WP wouldn’t allow me to post for challenges and then all comments were sent to spam. Ah! Now I remember.
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So much fun word bump in this piece! Wonderful!
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Thank-you, De. It was fun to think beyond the box.
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I like the idea of dreams daring us to take the next step.
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Thanks, Frank. At times, they do give us a nudge.
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Very pretty and imaginative poem! I like the last line…’Daring one to take the next step’… 🙂
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Thank-you, Barbara. It was fun to play with the words.
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WOW! ❤
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Thanks Amy for the ‘wow’. ❤
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Could almost be a child’s poem. Very cute and fitting.
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I’m not use to writing playful poetry, but I wiggled my way through it. Ha ha!
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Cosmic coincidence opens door
To unexpected permutations.. really like that!
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It made me think after I wrote it. Ha ha!
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I really love the reference to Hubble
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Thank-you, Bjorn. A bit of science inspired my imagination.
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This poem can turn the astronomical world on its head Olga, send it off to NASA and suggest they look inside poetry for their answers
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You made me roar with laughter, Denis. Thanks!
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I love that you’ve captured the majesty and absurdity of space here
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Thanks, Claire. Actually the ‘absurdity of space’ is a spiritual journey.
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this pops and excites just like a kaleidoscope! It’s great!!
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Thank-you, Damien. You have a wonderful way with words. I’m happy that you dropped by. ❤
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It was all my pleasure
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I like how you go from universe to creative mind to living dreams — with the fluidity of giggles throughout. I love ‘burps and giggles’ for the cosmos:)
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Thank-you Janice for expressing such a lovely analysis of my poem. It’s wonderful to get feedback like yours that is an affirmation of my creative journey. ❤
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I love the synchronicities in life and your ‘Universe burbs and giggles – cosmic coincidence opens door’ made me smile :o)
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Thank-you, Xenia. I really enjoyed the playful possibilities with our prompt word and combining that with some ‘universal truths’.
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☺💖
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Artistic nice approach 🙂
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Thank-you for your lovely comment, Susan. ❤
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Playful and imaginative
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Thank-you, Paul. Love creative playing with words. Never know what one will get.
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Quite a whimsical poem 😀
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Thank-you, Sanaa. Loved your turtle sandwich. ❤
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Bubble hubble to the universe and take up the adventure ~
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Thank-you, Grace. It was a fun adventure playing with words.
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Hello Olga! Gorgeous images and poem. Loved it!
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Thanks, Vashti. Hope you are doing well. ❤
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You’re welcome. I’m doing fine. I hope you’re having a great week. ❤ xx
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❤
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