Dome of laughing birds
Crying to humanity
Life’s bubble fragile
Earth rumbling signs of dismay
Awakening universe
*(Image provided by Colleen from Pixabay.com, but cropped.)
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Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge #28: Laugh & Cry
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Very timely! Love the pic!
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Thank, Marissa. Colleen’s image inspired the words. Usually I work the other way around.
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Really? Must be hard to always find an appropriate image.
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Yes it is. I don’t do Photoshop, so sometimes my photo library is inadequate. I do try to mostly use my own stuff.
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Oh yeah, best to have your own stuff so your don’t have to deal with copyright issues.
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Lovely words! Just apt for the pic.
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Thank-you for dropping by. Appreciate your comment. ❤
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Very deep Olga, wonderful poem.
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Thanks, Denis.
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Well done, Olga. I love how you incorporated the image, too! ❤
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Thank-you, Colleen. Without the image, I probably would have gone in a different direction. 🙂
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Wow! Powerful Tanka and a much needed reminder.
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Colleen’s image was a perfect inspiration. It reminded me also of the fragility of our planet. Thank-you, Vashti.
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