Betwixt veiled layers
Filling untouchable depths
Prophecy unfolds
Marie’s Haiga Heaven Challenge #29: Betwixt
TJ’s Haiku Household #16: Depth & Fill
Here’s the haiga format. Haiku on the image. Just learned how to do this. Time to step out of my comfort zone.
*Here’s the ‘free’ photo editor site I used that’s pretty user friendly if you want to experiment with a haiga. link
Whoa!!! Awesome and soooooooo powerful!!! You totally took me away with this, Olga! 🌈
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Thank-you Amy for your exuberant comment. The last line changed after I edited my cloudscape. The photo took on a foreboding tone like an omen in the sky. I had to run with it. 🙂
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I’m glad you ran with this. Incredible job you did!! 👏💕
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Sounds ominous!
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Yes, those clouds are definitely ominous. An inspiration for the last line. Thanks, Marissa.
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Very clever haiku to address 2 challenges. The image is a stunner.
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Thanks, Denis. That photo really stunned me also.
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Great take on prompt. Very intriguing. Thanks for joining in😀
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Love your Haiga Olga. Well done!
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Finally achieved success after a few attempts. A learning curve! Thanks, Marie. ❤
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I saw it. It looks great. Well done you. There will be no stopping you now!
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Ha ha! A new skill under my wing. 🙂
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Wow! Brilliant and the photo too! It has almost a “fungal” quality if you don’t mind me saying. Like some ominous growth overhead.
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Thanks, Tim. You have a very imaginative eye. Actually I saw a baby’s face in the ‘fungal’ cloud. That’s what cloud watching is about. We see different things. 🙂
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Bravo! I’m glad you persevered. The final version is good.
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Thanks, Marie. ❤
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Untouchable depths – I can almost feel it. Very transforming
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Thank-you, Anna. The mystery of ‘untouchable depths’ is intriguing. 🙂
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