Watching mesmerized
Feeling ocean voices roar
Light peeling layers
Too timid in the darkness
Dawn’s truth satiates senses
Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge #50: Voice & Watch
This entry was posted in Nature, Photography, Poetry and tagged Colleen's Weekly Poetry Challenge, Hawaii, Kauai, Nature, photography, Poetry, tanka. Bookmark the permalink.
I love that! …Ocean voices roar… What a great line. It fits the picture perfectly.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Robin. I do miss the roar of the ocean. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Me, too. 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful. Olga. I love the ocean and its ‘roaring voices.’
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank-you, Judy. Hope I can go back one day to experience the roaring again. Not Hawaii, but some other ocean side destination. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful Tanka, Olga. I love the ocean roaring. Well done and welcome back. I’m glad you had a great time. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank-you, Colleen. Good to be back, but I do miss the roar of the ocean and the overwhelmingly beautiful sunrises. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I can only imagine. What lovely memories. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Pingback: Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 51 #Haiku #Tanka #Haibun: GIFT & SONG – ✨Colleen Chesebro ✨The Fairy Whisper✨
Powerful poetry Olga creating clear imagery in the readers imagination. A wonderful dawn? at the wave break image.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Denis. Hawaii was a wonderland for photography and an inspiration for my poetry. I took over a thousand pics. Happy that you have enjoyed my posts. ❤
LikeLike