In the surreal depths of my earthly dreams,

I envisioned my ending,

but I wanted to see more.

I am more than the bones of death’s final blow.

I am an ethereal soul with a journey unknown.

Always an attachment

To those that I love.

With the breath of a feather,

Whisper and I will answer.


Sue’s Photo Prompt

(Both images provided by Sue Vincent.)


About Olga

I have always had an affinity for artistic endeavors and the beauties of nature. The power of the word combined with photography have become my creative spark.
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11 Responses to Remains

  1. Arati says:

    “With the breath of a feather,
    Whisper and I will answer.”
    So gentle and touching. I find this poem takes me to a quiet peaceful inner space where I just want to linger and float. Your words give a moving voice to the images.

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    • Olga says:

      Much appreciated, Arati. Thank-you for sharing your feelings about my poetry. When I saw Sue’s images, the words just came to me. No effort, no struggle, just floated into my consciousness. πŸ™‚


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  3. robbiecheadle says:

    A lovely poetic response to Sue’s prompt.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. rivrvlogr says:

    A soul infused with nobility and grace.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. willowdot21 says:

    I liked this very much πŸ’œ

    Liked by 1 person

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