Before
Coloring my world
Wisdom had to be earned
Laws of the universe
Took hold
Painting stories of drought and storms
Always one finger above water
I learned the hard way
To follow my inner voice
Then suddenly the sky cleared
Just for that moment
The wind’s direction changed
The greens shone through
In waking hours
Now detours are embraced
With gratitude of heart
“Embrace the detours.” (Kevin Charbonneau)
Patrick’s theme: Before https://pixtowords.com/2019/06/02/before-pic-and-a-word-challenge-190/
V. J. ‘s theme: Green https://onewomansquest.org/2019/06/03/v-j-s-weekly-challenge-51-green/
Very nice! Green is a hopeful color. Wonderful photo as well.
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Thank you so much. Yes, green definitely has a hopeful vibration. 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Intrigued by this poem, Olga. I read it three ways – altogether, just the bold, just the regular font – there are many layers. Lines that caught me: ” Before/ I could colour my world”, “always one finger above water”, and “detours are embraced”. An empowering poem.
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Thank-you, V.J. Happy that you noticed the layers. Before I read your comment, I made a few changes, but basically similar. 🙂
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I like the changes!
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Green can be interpreted in different ways. I love how you have shaped it here as the colour of hope.
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Yes, I know what you mean about the different meanings of green. After a way too long winter, green was a welcome sign of the hope for renewal. Thank-you for your thoughts, Heather. 🙂
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Yes, the green was a long time coming this year! You are most welcome.
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Love it> ❤️❤️
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Thank-you, Saania. ❤
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My pleasure 🙈😇
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