Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge #160: Party & Enjoy

Posted on 2017-07-31 by Olga

*( Created my own peep hole into the universe.  I think I see a galaxy in there. )

Dancing with a dream

Peep hole in eternity

Relishing the glimpse

 

*I used ‘dancing‘, instead of  ‘party‘.  Don’t we all dance at a party!

* Also, ‘relishing‘, instead of ‘enjoy‘. Enjoy is too bland of a word.

 

Ron’s Challenge

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I have always had an affinity for artistic endeavors and the beauties of nature. The power of the word combined with photography have become my creative spark.
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6 Responses to Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge #160: Party & Enjoy

  1. pranabaxom says:
    2017-07-31 at 4:49 pm

    Substitutes worked well with your words.

    I peeped through the peephole
    And came out empty
    A galaxy far far away
    And the ion drive failed
    Beam me up Scotty
    Please.

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  2. Marissa Bergen says:
    2017-07-31 at 5:57 pm

    That depends… is there music?

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  3. Olga says:
    2017-07-31 at 6:25 pm

    Always music at a celestial party. Maybe some crackles and plenty of fireworks. Ha ha! Here’s a link to some pulsar music. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uHEVo-LkDrQ

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  4. Vashti Q says:
    2017-08-11 at 11:18 am

    Hi Olga! Great use of the prompt words! 😀 xx

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